All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Parenting plays a vital role in the development of a child. Often parents think that they can relegate the task of imbibing moral values into the children, to teachers. On the contrary, both parents and teachers are equally important to mold a child. Whether parents must spend considerable time to visit their children's schools is a debatable issue. Only after a scrupulous analysis, can a clear-cut decision be taken. Though it might be considered unnecessary, there exist several advantages of parents paying periodical visits to their children's schools.
Firstly, most of the parent...
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