TOEFL TWE Level 3,2,1 and sample essays
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Think of the most interesting class you have ever taken. Why did you enjoy this class so much? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
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I took many classes in the four years of college but one was the most interesting of all of them: "The Sociology of transition".
The reasons which are the background of my choice are related to the professor and, on the other hand, to the contents of the cours.
In the first time, the "The Sociology of transition" class had come to reponse to my dillema about the unfunctionality of the social system in which I lived.
In the second time, the professor had been a practioner and a specialist, a man who had worked in the public administration and had made part from civil society (non-governamental organisation). I had many thing to learn from him.
We do not forget the specific of the moment when I took this class: I had been in the second year when I had known the bases of the sociology and I had had an overview of the social system mechanism.
An ther extra-reasons is that my best friends took this class. I had enjoed
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The most significant and recognize class I have ever taken ,is the class or the period that I have spent at the university , it was energized with pleasure ,excitment friends,and tired ,it influence on me in a great deal.
I have really feel how the life in university is beautifull ,I with my friends went for a picnics,doing homeworhs toghers, laugh on the jokes which every one of us must interested in.
Also I have lived the feeling of energization in the exam's times , seeing and knowing the students and their welling,someone who are chatting,and the others who are good ,so I feel this period has candidated me for the work life.
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The most interesting class I have ever taken is history.
I took many history classes in my high school and I enjoyed all of them.I think, the reason was my teachers. They made classes more and more enjoyable. They teached me many things about Turkish and world history. They provided activities like
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