Countries should provide enough food for their own people and therefore lessen exportation of food abroad, if needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The providing of sufficient amount of food to inhabitances must always be country’s paramount consideration. Thus, there is a view that governments should give the first priority to fulfill food necessities of its citizens than exporting of food abroad. In my opinion, this is a prudent approach that enables any country to enhance nutritional status and mitigate dietary deficiencies of its inhabitances.
On the other hand, exportation of food is a profitable business that can benefit any country in many ways. That brings a substantial amount of income to the country and provides employment ...
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Sentence: In fact,the necessity of food is considered as an indispensable as no one con survive without sufficient amount of food.
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