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Do you agree or disagree with the statement that people can make friends with guy who has more money.
Money has never appealed to me. City born and city bred, I always regard friendship as something that can't be measured by money. The reason why people insist on making friend with guy who has more money is beyond me. It’s unadvisable to do that from my points of view and I would explore only two primary ones to support myself here.
First of all, it is a general truth that the principle of people making friends should be based on mutual understandings rather than money. If you can do without the few pleasures that money brings you, you will find the real friends provide you the best that ...
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 470 350
No. of Characters: 2103 1500
No. of Different Words: 246 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.656 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.474 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.307 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 80 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.364 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.52 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.303 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.47 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.194 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5