Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in next 10 years? How can these problems be overcome.
In 21st century, there is a lot of development and advancement in technology and medicines, due to which our average life has increased substantially. People have a better living and better quality of life. However, these improvements also have some negative effects on the country. World is facing significant challenges with environment, population and education. These problems are expected to increase in next decade.
Challenges relating to environment are mostly due to pollution caused by smoke emitted from industries and vehicles; deforestation to make land for new buildings. Global warming commonly summarizes the issue with environment.
Population explosion is also another major challenge faced by the countries. Due to advancement in healthcare and improved lifestyle, people live longer. In past average age of humans was 60-70 years which has increased to 80 years in present days.
Third, most important issue is education. On one side, many people are gaining education in various professional courses, however, there are not enough jobs to cater to the need of educated population, which in turn increases unemployment. On the other side, it is also believed education standards are deteriorating due to segmentation and fragmentation of subjects.
India is facing challenges from all the above problems relating to environment, Population and education which are inter-related to each other. India is the second most populated country. To meet the living requirements of large population, people tend towards cutting forests and creating accommodation space for humans which negatively impacts environment. Unemployment has increased due to dearth of enough jobs for educated population which influences the problem of increase in crime. Increase in population also increases the need of more vehicles and excessive use of vehicles causes traffic jams and pollution.
Drastic measures have to be implemented to bring these risks under control. Strict rules on percentage of emission of smoke need to be drawn. Birth control measures need to be mandated to control population growth. Vehicle production number per year need to be defined and people should be encouraged to travel in public transport, which will reduce pollution to some extent. Forest areas need to be cordoned-off to prevent any human activities and encourage a-forestation. If deforestation increased any further it would turn the country into dry land.
In conclusion, all the challenges discussed above are dangerous to human kind if not auctioned now. Ten years from now, the situation will worsen further, therefore there is a need to act now!
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