How do movies or televisions influence people's behaviour? Use reason and specific examples to support your answer.
Visiual media are very common in all countries. Televisions are excellent examples of these kind of telecomunication vehicles. They are very influencial on people concerning their easy to reach properties and sharing pace of news. So, televisions can easily effect people.
Since their invention, televisions have been very popular. Initially, they were used in houses. Afterwards they became avaliable at everywhere. Therefore, everybody can follow programs to be broadcasted by televisions. Nowadays, almost in every transportation vehicles there is a T.V.. T.V.s are found even metros some of which are very deeper underground. Moreover, due to improvements in mobile phone technology, T.V. are also provided in cellular phones as default softwares. In this context, on grounds that televisions are very widespread, they are very effective on humans.
In today`s global world, news spreads very rapidly not only from one city to another, but also from one country to another even it is on different continent. For instance, commentaries are used for immediate share of news, officials` speeches, sports events etc. Sometimes, correspondents notify circumstances at wars. In addition, televisions are very beneficial for activists who want to gather more people for a purpose. Thus, because of their instant broadcasting ability, T.V.s have big impacts on people.
To conclude, televisions have been in use for approximately a century and everybody can watch them at everywhere. Furthermore, T.V. are very successful servants of globalization in accordance with sharing global events. Bacause of these properties, T.V.s affect human beings very smoothly.
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