A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Who has not ever listened about problems with the ozone barrier? Think about it and it is probably that you realize that this problem involves everybody. Contamination of environment is a common problem for entire world. Therefore, if a company is going to share its money, I would strongly recommend it to invest that money in protecting the environment for some reasons regarding contamination derives too many problems, the help will make a better world for future and protecting environment betters either our lives as lives of animals and plants.
First and foremost, at present, there are man...
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Sentence: Even Art find inspiration in animals and plants for their works as well.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace find with verb, past tense
Sentence: In a nutshell, considering all these reasons, we can reach the conclusion that although some people would consider that company should give its money to support the art, personally I believe that investing that money in protect the environment will bring about many more benefits for our lives at present and for the our children's life in future.
Description: The token in is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to in and protect
Sentence: If the company gives its money to environmental companies and governments, it could be possible to reduce the quantity of residues thrown to the atmosphere by making campaings of conscience, telling the problems which brought the contamination of the environment.
Error: campaings Suggestion: campaigns
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Score: 26 in 30
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 450 350
No. of Characters: 2220 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.606 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.933 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.704 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 126 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 48 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.684 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.929 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.32 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.111 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5