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"The best way to make a company profitable is to encourage cooperation and collaboration rather than promote employee competition. "
They say "United we stand, Divide we fall", and I believe this is true in all aspects of life be it in the prosperity of a family or the progress of a company. A company by definition is a business which is based on the principle of sharing and operates in a group. To divide this fundamental functioning of the company will undermine its very meaning. A company in its nascent stages is made up of a few founding members however as it grows it absorb people from various walks of life each of who provide particular sets of expertise that make a company profitable in its growth. This is the basic w...
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Sentence: They say 'United we stand, Divide we fall', and I believe this is true in all aspects of life be it in the prosperity of a family or the progress of a company.
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Sentence: A company in its nascent stages is made up of a few founding members however as it grows it absorb people from various walks of life each of who provide particular sets of expertise that make a company profitable in its growth.
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Sentence: A company in its nascent stages is made up of a few founding members however as it grows it absorb people from various walks of life each of who provide particular sets of expertise that make a company profitable in its growth.
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