Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?
According to the facts, provided by scientists and the media, the risk of climate change is becoming more and more obvious nowadays. In order to tackle this problem, not only governments' support is in demand, but also responsiveness of population is required. To my way of thinking, it is much more effective for the government and population to work jointly, so that the chance of preventing this problem will appear much higher.
First and foremost, let us consider the fact that the government's capability to make a change is quite high, because indeed they are the controllers. Measure could...
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