Now a days food has become easy to prepare.has this improve way people live.Use specific reasons and examples.
In contemporary society,the introduction of modern technology has profound influence on human life style.Because of technology process of food preparation is become very easy and fast.As we know,in lightning era we have not enough time to take our food properly on time as a result technology has produce numerous equipments to prepare food quickly and in easy way.Here i would like to discuss both sides with my own perception.
To commence with,supporters who believe that, food has become easy to prepare improve the way of people living.According to them, in the jet age of twenty first century most of the people runs in the rat race as a result they have not enough time to food in proper time But in last some decades we seen lot of tremendous invention by modern technology consequently microwave ovens are used in mostly homes.Moreover conventional food are full of cholesterol,heavy and take lot of time to prepare.But the semi packeted food or ready made food are less cholesterol,fat less and easy to prepare within few minutes, So mostly people prefer that food and think that it improve our living lifestyle.
On the opponent side, people who believe that the recooked and semi packed food are less nutritional and harmful for our bodies.According to them,every people take homemade food that is full of vitamin and too nutritional consequently we gain a healthy body.Moreover people who take their food in hurry do not give their proper time to families and spoiled their eating habits thus they lose the proper diet calories and proper nutritions that are necessary for their food.So,they prefer the conventional home made food.
As per my opinion, both sides will claim that their side is superior, But i would like to swayed with this statement that the preparation process of conventional food is time consuming.A time which we spend on conventional method of food preparation that time we could utilize in important affairs of our life.To illustrate that a survey conducted by Times Of India revealed that packed food provides help to those women to spend their lot of time on conventional methods of food preparation.
In a nutshell,after doing a great deal of thoughts and deliberation, i would like to say that modern technology gives us broad benefits.So, recooked food has more benefits outweigh to conventional food that has improve our living lifestyle.
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Sentence: As we know, in lightning era we have not enough time to take our food properly on time as a result technology has produce numerous equipments to prepare food quickly and in easy way.
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Sentence: According to them, in the jet age of twenty first century most of the people runs in the rat race as a result they have not enough time to food in proper time But in last some decades we seen lot of tremendous invention by modern technology consequently microwave ovens are used in mostly homes.
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Sentence: Moreover conventional food are full of cholesterol, heavy and take lot of time to prepare.
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Sentence: But the semi packeted food or ready made food are less cholesterol, fat less and easy to prepare within few minutes, So mostly people prefer that food and think that it improve our living lifestyle.
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Sentence: As per my opinion, both sides will claim that their side is superior, But i would like to swayed with this statement that the preparation process of conventional food is time consuming.
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Sentence: So, recooked food has more benefits outweigh to conventional food that has improve our living lifestyle.
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