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"As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate."
From the simplistic lifestyle of yore to the present era where every scintilla of the world is inundated with scad of technocrats, man's dependance on technology seems ubiquitous.To doubt if technology is inhibiting man's thinking ability is indirectly a question on the evolution of the entire human race. It was not a miracle that let early man to the discovery of fire; the invention of wheel was not merely a windfall; Graham Bell did not just stumble upon the idea of a telephone; every invention of science has evolved through a series of incessant brainstorming sessions and untrammeled trials...
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Sentence: We have subjugated technology, its not the other way round.
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Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 508 350
No. of Characters: 2444 1500
No. of Different Words: 295 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.748 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.811 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.602 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 160 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.091 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.83 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.455 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.26 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.429 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5