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Do you agree or disagree that progress is always good? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Have you ever felt that your country is progressing? Think about it and it is probable that you have felt deeply if you live in a developing country. In this kind of countries, every step that the country makes for welfare of citizens is strongly feeling by everyone. As citizen of one of them, personally I believe that progress is always a strong influence on the improvement of the welfare of a country. Just as progress can better the life conditions of citizens, this can also work for a individual person for reasons that I will describe following.
First and foremost, progress will bring ab...
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Sentence: Just as progress can better the life conditions of citizens, this can also work for a individual person for reasons that I will describe following.
Description: The word better is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to better
Sentence: If a government make its labor correctly and invest rightly the money that it earns from people, this will become in development.
Description: The fragment government make its is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
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