do u agree or disagree with the following statement ?
Actions speak louder than words
use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
“Actions speak louder than word”, it’s just aphorism with respect to some people, while this saying hide a great meaning. Can anyone say a lot of word about what he does, what he will be, but nothing appears in real world. Words are only reflection of action.
First of all, the words become meaningless without action. Anyone can say I want to make my dream come true, but to make the dream true it’s required to work hard in order to achieve the main target. For example, my friend in my high school plan to become a great doctor, that’s what he dream when he was a little child, but this major required a high mark and to get required mark that allow him to enter to medicine department need a great effort, but he is doing nothing to arrive his goal. So just the action will prove what u say.
In another hand, people usually evaluate the other by action not by words; in fact the word without action will lead to lose the confidence of the other. Action should meet verbal obligations or sentiments. For instance a person who constantly talks about the plight of the poor but never thinking of donating to a charity, their words have empty quality. Therefore, actions are the factor that defines the characteristics of the person and how much is honest with himself before the other.
To conclude, it’s better to make a great effort to achieve what u want rather than feeling proud about it. So we should think carefully before saying anything whether we can do it or not. It is possible to lose many important things in life.” Let your word teach and your action speak”.
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Sentence: Actions speak louder than word, it's just aphorism with respect to some people, while this saying hide a great meaning.
Description: A verb, present participle or gerund is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to saying and hide
Sentence: For example, my friend in my high school plan to become a great doctor, that's what he dream when he was a little child, but this major required a high mark and to get required mark that allow him to enter to medicine department need a great effort, but he is doing nothing to arrive his goal.
Description: The fragment he dream when is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace dream with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Description: The fragment that allow him is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace allow with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment department need a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace need with verb, past tense
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2 (same grammatical issue)
No. of Words: 287 350
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 287 350
No. of Characters: 1253 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.366 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.176 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.701 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.515 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5