Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Haste makes waste use specific reasons and examples to support your response
“Haste make waste” ,it’s an old aphorism with great meaning, which no one know it’s meaning if they fall in problem, at that moment they will know the expensive value of what that aphorism have. Rashness in taking decision will lead to undesirable result. Risking our life with rashness decision would pay costly than it.
First of all, that expression can be seemed clearly in our daily life and in many activities we do. Haste in every activity we do will lead ton accepted result that may lead to lose your life. Driving a car is the best example about what mention before, people who drive with a high speed in order to arrive to his date in early hour will have a high risk to make an accident and may lose his life, so to avoid this risk, he can slow down and take a much time rather to pay an expensive cost.
On another hand rashness make us lose our attention, feeling un relax, we just want to finish our aim quickly without paying attention about how much we will make mistake, right that everyone can make mistake but if we make more effort and paying attention about every step we will take that’s will lead to decrease the percentage of mistake that may occur. For instance, a student how want to finish his studying for his exam in order to hanging with his friend or he want to watching TV, he will not paying attention to small details that may be a key for solving a question with high mark, so the result will be failing in his exam, and may lead to broken his dream about his future education.
To conclude, haste is lead to undesirable result, so hold your breath and slowdown is good for yourself and will offer good advantages with a high quality, which it have an impact on our whole life. So take your time and enjoy it since we live only once.
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Sentence: On another hand rashness make us lose our attention, feeling un relax, we just want to finish our aim quickly without paying attention about how much we will make mistake, right that everyone can make mistake but if we make more effort and paying attention about every step we will take that's will lead to decrease the percentage of mistake that may occur.
Description: The fragment rashness make us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: For instance, a student how want to finish his studying for his exam in order to hanging with his friend or he want to watching TV, he will not paying attention to small details that may be a key for solving a question with high mark, so the result will be failing in his exam, and may lead to broken his dream about his future education.
Description: The fragment how want to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, past participle
Description: The fragment he want to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace want with verb, past tense
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and broken
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'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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