Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology on its course of development has evolved to serve human needs and simplify the daily routine and even create new dimensions in terms of air travel, TV, Laptops and various other equipment. It is very much integrated in out life and we cannot imagine life with out it especially in urban areas. Technology has so much so integrated in our life that on a day to day basis we hardly notice its presence and thus it would be foolhardy to say that technology have makes our lives complicated to say the least.
Necessity is the mother of all inventions, adhering to this fact , technology is...
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Sentence: While another case which illustrate my point is the development of nuclear science.
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Sentence: Technology does not make anybodies life sompler or complicated rather we make our life simpler or complicated depending upon the weather we use or abuse the technology in our hand.
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Sentence: It has lead to break through understanding of our universe and is also producing a lot of energy and at the same time it also created wepaons of mass destruction.
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Sentence: This tendency of human being has been from the early civilisation and is pronounced in every strat of life not only technology.
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