Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
There are a growing number of people like to wake up early, while there are also a number of people wake up late, as it depends on their liabilities of their work. But personally, i would like to wake up early. Nevertheless, i will explain why i prefer to wake up in the morning instead of late.
Wakening up early, it will help you to be energetic. In adittion, it will support to organize your whole day perfectly. As result, you can manage your food on time. However, if someone wake up early, it will support one's to saty healthy. To illustrate, there is a research wrote an article on medical jornal, those people who wake up in the morning, they keep active and healthy. In addition, they have the ability to do time management. Furthermermore, it showed, those kind of people have strong relation ship with their family. As they were described, that they are the happiest comapred to who wake up lately. Knowing, they maintain a good relation with their friends as well.
Besides, if someone has work in early shift, he will be released early from one's job. In other words, he or she could have other tasks need to be done after work. Or, they can do another job to increase their financial matters. Due to life pressure in the real world.
To sum up, wakening up early is much better than late. In addition, it helps someone to become more heathy. As, it can force them maitaining a strong relation ship with their family and friends alike. And doing full management for the rest of the day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, in addition, kind of, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55514705882 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43140930109 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5945665111 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.95 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231330118525 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067971685131 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552735609312 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13749804778 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357863671744 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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