Many important discoveries or creations are accidental: it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another.
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Discovery or creation inherently means finding or making something new totally unknown till that point of time and only speculation or assumptions existed before the discovery took place. By saying that important discoveries or creations were accidental will actually belie the nature of discovery that is as sadi to find or create something new which was totally obscure earlier. If we now for certain about answer to any question for which no factual proof exists then occurence of the same will fall in the category of validation as opposed to discovery. This said does not mean that major discove...
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Sentence: If we delve deeper in the realm of science and discoveries, their is an interplay of various science and theories and they play an important role in defining each other.
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Sentence: By saying that important discoveries or creations were accidental will actually belie the nature of discovery that is as sadi to find or create something new which was totally obscure earlier.
Error: sadi Suggestion: said
Sentence: If we now for certain about answer to any question for which no factual proof exists then occurence of the same will fall in the category of validation as opposed to discovery.
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Sentence: The truth can reveal many discoveries inherent in that particular question and one clearly sees that categorising it as accidental or digression from original intention will do injustice to the greater realm of the Science.
Error: categorising Suggestion: categorizing
Sentence: We see that age of earth, half life of carbon, isotopes are elements of bigger truth which is finding the reason os our existence, the question of universe.
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