TOEFL Sample essay : integrated essay from TPO6

The lecturer addresses each of the three criticisms of communal online encyclopedias mentioned in the Reading passage.

The lecturer admits that communal online encyclopedias, like any reference book, may contain errors, but she claims that these errors can be corrected much more easily and quickly than those printed in a paper encyclopedia. The Reading passage, in contrast, points to the inaccuracy of information in online encyclopedias, presenting the argument that errors in these resources are due to lack of professional knowledge among contributors.

The lecturer then gives two strateg...