Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour .Others disagree and think that host country should welcome culture differences.Discuss both these points or views and give your opinion.WORLD LIMIT is 250 words!
Tourism is increasing fiercely,since the advancement has been turning the whole world into a global village.It has also raised some questions that it is pondered that tourists should follow custom and behaviour of other countries .However,there is another line of thought which prefers that host countries should adopt visitors culture .I reckon that both perspectives will be agitated before we reach to a conclusion.
Firstly,visitors should follow the system of other countries ,otherwise at some point their harsh or different behaviour may be a eyesore for the host citizens.Also,people may not accept other culture because with the emergence of it their own culture will be damage .Thus,they will loose their identity in the world.Also,visitors when visit other countries should respect that area,customs and tradition and adopt all these things because cooperation is a symbol of noble man.
However ,there is a counter argument that host country should welcome the culture differences .It is believed that the visitors are like God ,thus,the people should respect tourists and also visitors visits to know the different cultures not to create conflicts with other people.Tourist after visiting other countries grope difficult to follow other rules or behaviours .Being a human everyone should have the quality of head and heart.Thus,host countries should adopt the different cultures.
In a nutshell, in my personal pragmatic cognizance the country should accept the different cultures and treat the visitors in an elegant manner.The countrymen should raise theirs humanity and their door should be opened for all the different people.
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Sentence: The countrymen should raise theirs humanity and their door should be opened for all the different people.
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