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what all are necessary to get good health
“Health is wealth” is a famous quote used to said by our elders. Health makes to stay happy, comfortable and peaceful. Unluckily, in modern days, increased industrialization and urbanization causes health problems due to increased use of vehicles in turn causes increased pollution and fumes. In this busy world people also not caring about their health because of busy schedules and increased work pressure. In my view, we have to focus on food and daily exercises to maintain our health.
Food is main source from which we are getting more disease. Due to lack of time, we are not eating fres...
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In fact this essay has many
In fact this essay has many more grammatical mistakes to be corrected.
Sentence: Health is wealth is a famous quote used to said by our elders.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and said
Sentence: Just spending one hour time on exercise can makes a lot of difference than not doing anything.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to can and makes
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Avg. Sentence Length: 14.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.583 7.5
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 377 350
No. of Characters: 1769 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.406 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.692 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.588 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.583 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.269 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.279 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.464 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.132 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5