Claim: In any field-business, politics, education, government-those in power should step down after give years.
Reason: The sunrest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization.
For any business or politics etc to be successful, a need for revitalization is needed. According to George Smart, " The power to any success of an enterprise is facilitated by revitalization which comes from power shifting". To define the role and/or the importance of revitalization is like defining the old importance of leardeship which is influence by new ideas. Is the role of power shifting in an organization is to serve as good? If so, in what way? Leadership is one thing, and knowledge and power behind it its another thing.
Let's talk about politics, its very essential that be it...
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- Claim: In any field-business, politics, education, government-those in power should step down after give years.Reason: The sunrest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization. 93
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Sentence: Leadership is one thing, and knowledge and power behind it its another thing.
Description: A determiner, possessive is not usually followed by a determiner/pronoun, singular
Suggestion: Refer to its and another
Sentence: In this case in helps to know the necessary thing that will lead in progressing.
Description: The token in is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to in and helps
Sentence: For example, in University of Nigeria Nsukka, their was a period of chaos when thingss was not moving out fine; the call for a change was due and it have to be taking into action.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by was
Suggestion: Refer to their and was
Sentence: To define the role and/or the importance of revitalization is like defining the old importance of leardeship which is influence by new ideas.
Error: leardeship Suggestion: leadership
Sentence: The importance of this situatipn is for ruler to be re-elected every 5years, atlist this will lead to a new revolution.
Error: atlist Suggestion: ?
Error: situatipn Suggestion: situation
Sentence: That is a rude way pf leading people, new ideas come from diferent power and individual capability.
Error: diferent Suggestion: different
Sentence: Bringing up changes such as, new governing rules, government policicies and a way of achieving success.
Error: policicies Suggestion: policies
Sentence: Whatever it may be to enhance business stratagies comes from the ruling power 'ascendency'
Error: stratagies Suggestion: strategies
Sentence: Can the new ruing ideas revitlize the business?
Error: revitlize Suggestion: revitalize
Error: ruing Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Needs such as, schools renovation, class maintainance etc which is a way that was handle in nonchalance attitude towards it.
Error: maintainance Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In conclussion, it's very important to have a constant change in ruling.
Error: conclussion Suggestion: conclusion
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.029 0.07
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 36 15
No. of Words: 544 350
No. of Characters: 2555 1500
No. of Different Words: 222 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.829 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.697 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.857 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 174 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 103 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 67 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.111 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.123 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.361 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.236 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.422 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.029 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5