The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are figure concerning the ages of residents of Yemen and Italy in 2000, as well as the forecasts for 2050. In general, it can be seen that the 15-59 years-old is the group accounting for the biggest proportion.
In 2000, the figure for 0-14 years of age in Yemen was ahead of that in Italy by a wide margin, 50.1% for the former and 14.3 % for the latter. To turn to people aged between 15 and 59, the figure for Italy was 61.6%, as against 46.3 for Yemen. In the oldest age group Italy's over-60-year-olds was nearly 8 times as many as Yemen's, with 24.1% and 3.6% respectively.
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