The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author asserts that greatness of a nation is indicated by the well being of all its people rather than just the achievements of its rulers, scientist or artist. The author discusses two ways of measuring the greatness of country within the context of the claim, one being the general welfare of its people and other achievements of its eminent personalities. In my opinion, the true measure of greatness of a country is the former one-that is whether all the people in the country are capable of satisfying their basic needs of food, shelter and clothing.
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