Some people think that in the modern world we have become more dependent on each other, while others think that people are now more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that human beings’ lives have witnessed dramatic changes in this day and age. Whereas many people believe that dependence is a new trend in the modern world, others reject this notion, holding a totally opposite opinion. Presented below are several factors that account for the stark contrast between these two perspectives.
On the one hand, there are a number of reasons associated with the reliance on each other in recent years. Firstly, co-operation is a must since our jobs are becoming more complicated and specialised. For instance, in a typical marketing team, there must be a...
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Sentence: All in all, whether people are becoming more autonomous or not should be seen in different aspects before reaching a conclusion.
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Suggestion: Refer to not and should
Sentence: Firstly, co-operation is a must since our jobs are becoming more complicated and specialised.
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Sentence: Additionally, the fact that modern cititzens tend to live in nuclears families or in small units is another justification.
Error: cititzens Suggestion: citizens
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Sentence: This newborn trend definitely promotes the independece among people.
Error: independece Suggestion: independence
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