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The graphs below show the type of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age
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Given are the graphs illustrating the different kind of music albums bought by Briton according to gender as well as groups of age.
It it evident from the information provided that male were dominant in term of music purchasing while certain type of music albums were interested by different age groups.
To be more specific, the people at the age from 25-34 who enjoyed pop music was at by far the highest proportion, which threefold that of people who were 45+ with 8% and was well-over that of 16-24 age people with 23%. Rock music fans followed a similar pattern when a fr...
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