some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

I m,desperate to know are my ideas and representation good according to demand of essay ?????????????

Sentence: It has been extremely debatable issue that whether giving fixed punishment for each type of crime is acceptable or it is mandatory to analyze considerable aspects behind commited crime before determining punishment since crime is on the rise.
Error: commited Suggestion: committed

Sentence: First and foremost, the vital function to encourage fixed punishment is played by the mentainence of equality for all types of criminals whether they are poor or rich.
Error: mentainence Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: For example, Sometime, affulent people hire excellent lawyers who represent the facts in the manners via distortion to protect their clients from severe punishment which is fixed for very cruel act ultimately, size of punishment has to be curtailed just because of fake justifications.
Error: affulent Suggestion: affluent

Sentence: In such case, people who force them deserve more hardr punishment than inoccent kids. unlike fixed punishment, criteria of punishment can be modified as per demand of each type of case.
Error: hardr Suggestion: hard
Error: inoccent Suggestion: innocent

Sentence: To recapitulate, it is quiet evident that crime has been order of the day. curtailing severeness of punishment for those having negligible involvement in crime, offering rehablitation to culprits can be productive to bring lot of criminals at the path of morality as humanity's prime duty is to fortify humiliation of mankind.
Error: rehablitation Suggestion: rehabilitation

flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2

Yes, ideas and representation are great!

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 383 350
No. of Characters: 2001 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.424 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.225 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.965 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.357 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.854 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.349 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.588 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

Tnx sir , one more writer Tessy james I guess also wrote this same essay , she scored 8.0 and I also got 8.0
but if we compare ideas of both me and tessy , there is huge difference between ideas and representation ...she gave only one or 2 example that was about crime becouse of self defence

but my ideas were different I inserted example of slum boys and people committing suicide intetionally by coming in front of cars bus of innocent drivers

so I want to know what exactly make essays deserving 8.0 , are ideas have much greater role to play ..???????
my grammar , vocabulary , and other things are up to mark
I want to know about the role of ideas ...how much do ideas impact if one or two ideas are irrelevant or less valuable

sir I want to know that is there any difference regarding evaluation and scoring of essay between testbig and real test in ielts exam.?????

one of my student inserted d same essay on testbig that she wrote in real ielts test ....bt she was scored 5.0 bands by testbig ...by contrast in real test she got 7.5 ...so why it happened ???????