Claim: It is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Reason: The reputation of anyone who is subjected to media scrutiny will eventually be diminished.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
There have been heroes in the past and the count is still on in modern soceity too. A person whose achievements benefit the society is look upto for inspiration by most people. Such popularity makes them the cynosure of media attention in all areas of their life. However, whether their reputation will eventually be lost depends on several factors and not solely on media scrutiny.
Not all famous personalites are inevitably reprobates. Many eminent people who are admired for their achievements by the societies have been able to maintain their dignity and reputation despite media intervent...
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Sentence: A person whose achievements benefit the society is look up to for inspiration by most people.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and look
Sentence: Hence, whether a person's character will eventually be besmirched by the media depends upon his moral conduct irrespective of of the fact that he/she is examined by the media everytime.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a preposition
Suggestion: Refer to of and of
Sentence: Media's intervention in the life of these public figures had been able to exposed their true character to the society.
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and exposed
Sentence: There have been heroes in the past and the count is still on in modern soceity too.A person whose achievements benefit the society is look upto for inspiration by most people.
Error: upto Suggestion: up to
Error: soceity Suggestion: society
Sentence: Not all famous personalites are inevitably reprobates.Many eminent people who are admired for their achievements by the societies have been able to maintain their dignity and reputation despite media intervention in all spheres of their life.Barrack Obama's personal and professional life is put under scrunity by the media for reasons of betraying things unknown to the public,some of them resulting in newspaper headlines.Even after such meticulous examination by the media,he has been able to
Error: scrunity Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: personalites Suggestion: personalities
Sentence: sustain his honor and respect among his people.It is not because media has been unable to reveal his depraved character to the soceity by not having enough information about him,his dignity and honor is the result of his sublime personality.
Error: soceity Suggestion: society
Sentence: Nevertheless,it all depends on the integrity of media and the person regarded as hero of whether their dignity remains pristine or is maligned by their own infirmties or due to media deception.
Error: infirmties Suggestion: No alternate word
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