Some people think that scientists experimenting with animals in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
New products must be checked by producer whether they are totally safe for human use or not. Various types of experiments are set in that purpose. One the simplest and most widespread one is experiment on the animals. Inventions in the factors like sport, medicine and etc. animal’s support is used widely. In my opinion it is cheapest and the most efficient choice, however, like the other experiments it has both positive and negative sides.
Today, at the time when the numbers of many animals are disappearing, it is very risky to make experiments on them. Moreover, some animal experiments a...
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