Several languages die every year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion.
Some Thoughts about the fewer languages in world could be easier which is due to the languages that die out every year. This is the edge of not writing language I honestly disagree on this topic.
The languages are the identity of any kind of community and castes or persons which are intended to presence it rather than let it vanish and use another some international languages. In the context of Nepal too, the tribal languages like 'Route" and "Khas" are going to be extent due to the modern cultures invaded those peoples to communicate in other languages. the ought to communicate with their community by their own language. the need to preserve and pass it or teach it to their forth coming generations.
Languages that are used less are always left out or isolated so as to embrace the new or common language. the generations always try to seek for new things out in the case of languages they are always needed to be minded that their own languages identifies them to every where they go.
The Use fo languages is not so complex as the peoples think about it. Learning new languages is good, makes them multilingual and improves this talent but without leaving the previous one. The antique languages such as "Pali Script" on Ashoka Pillar cannot be read by every one due to the extinction. If those peoples have passed the knowledge to their ancestors it would have been easy to go with it.
Finally, extinct of languages are using fewer languages does not refer to easeness in communication in contrary brings many conflictions and misunderstandings in future studying the past matters.
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Sentence: Finally, extinct of languages are using fewer languages does not refer to easeness in communication in contrary brings many conflictions and misunderstandings in future studying the past matters.
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