Issue:"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."
Is written format losing its importance as a result of the popularity and convincing mode of record capturing through video camera? While some people, in order to preserve age old methodologies, strongly state that video camera documenting can never beat written forms, Others are of the opinion that It indeed is more important to traditional style of documenting through written records. In my view, In this era filled with Light speed communication all around the world, I agree with the above statement that Video camera has become more important form of documentation than written records. I wou...
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- Discuss how well reasoned you find this argument. The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products."Previous experience has shown that our stores 60
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Sentence: It would be such a cumbersome task if they resort to written style of documention.
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