Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
This sentence about saving endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities is very general without paying attention to certain approach. These days, the most proportion of animals and plants are menaced by human activities. Human beings destroy the habitats of animals and replaced them with big factories and industrial areas.
In some cases, certain animals and plants have the potential of extinction while play important role on cycle life. If human beings do not like to protect these kinds of species little by little the consequences of extinction of these species bring important limitation that cannot be ignored easily. For instance, specific plants those have significant features in order to use for medical industry should be protected by human beings by considering their soil and the amount of humidity that need. These kinds of plant need special circumstance and saving them is a good deal for people because by supporting them people would be able to cure certain dangerous disease through healthy way without using chemical methods.
Furthermore, there are some kinds of species that are ruined through human activities indirectly. If people take only endangered species that have potential of extinction into account, little by little other kinds of dangerous species that have close relationship with these species will be declined. Because certain dangerous animals feed from specific animals in order to be alive and make a balance in their cycle life. For instance some kinds of monkeys are foods of specific dangerous tigers that prone to be extinct because of drought as result of human activities. If people make efforts to save these tigers without paying attention to their specific foods little by little they face several problems and would not be able to save these tigers.
In addition, it cannot be overlooked that special activities of human beings have long term consequences like global warming and melting of polar ice caps. By changing the amount of temperature and increasing the level of ocean water or melting the ice mountain, the most proportion of species will be threatened by missing their habitats due to increasing the carbon dioxide and global warming. The society would not be able to underestimate the cost of these damages and categorize the species that are decreased due to direct effect of human activities.
In conclusion, the society should protect all of species that the risk of their extinction is very high without generalizing certain rights. Some kind of useful species has the potential of extinction because of natural disaster like floods and earthquake while have profound impact on people’ life, so people should try to save them and reap the benefit of this mutual deal.
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Sentence: In some cases, certain animals and plants have the potential of extinction while play important role on cycle life.
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Sentence: Some kind of useful species has the potential of extinction because of natural disaster like floods and earthquake while have profound impact on people' life, so people should try to save them and reap the benefit of this mutual deal.
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