GENERAL TRAINING TASK 1
One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import – export business, and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, say what product you want to recommend to him. Tell him where he / she can get this product. Explain why you want to recommend this product
Dear Asdasd,
The letter received two days ago has made me glad, I was a bit surprise caused by you want to open an import – export trading. It is an honourable that your company trust me to choose my local product that will sell in your country.
It had better if you can take batik as a selling stuff. Batik is a traditional fabric origin of my town. It is quite famous and normally we wear in many ceremonies. It turns not only a dress but also a trouser. Batik has various patterns so you are able to select which motifs you love it.
Then, talk about sellers, there are many places that provide the batik. In my town, totally they are almost 25 batik shops producing this unique material. Event though you may buy directly to local producer. Online shops are another choice. Moreover, this good is a very good selection. My uncle who is living in japan has a small business to over batiks to Japanese, and he said that he achieves a big profit, the last many holidaymakers, who take a vacation in Indonesia, utilize batik as a merchandise.
Anyway thank you for your attention, I am looking forward for your responses.
Best wishes,
Kakaki
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Sentence: It is an honourable that your company trust me to choose my local product that will sell in your country.
Description: The fragment company trust me is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace trust with verb, past tense
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 203 200
No. of Characters: 878 1000
No. of Different Words: 140 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.775 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.325 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.307 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 57 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 36 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 10 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.584 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.514 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4