International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.
Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
International tourism is one of the ways, that a country can count it as way to support one economically. In addition, other countries depend on it basically. So far, we belive that it can be counted as advantages. coincidently, it leads to disadvantages. So i agree that advantages outweigh disadvantages. I will explain in details as following:
On the one hand, tourism can rise the part of economy in one country. There are a growing number all over the world like to invest their money while they are visiting a country. For example, in Dubai. It has recorded the highest rate in tourism in the world. As in consequence, its enconomic has grown into 70% growth in 2016 compared to 2000 and 2005. When visitors came to this country, they had concluded that it is a good place to to do business in it. To be more specific, the side of real states have been increased well. Whereas, other foreigners have spent a lot of money to open new retail business trade. Furthermore, Dubai is multi culutural country in the world. Hence, they have found out that it is great location for investing their money in it. As a result, the country can have advantages while they are opening new business in it, and foreingers can get benefits from it.
On other hand, we believe that tourists can bring valuable things for example, cameras, and jewels from their countries. For this reason, a number of thieves will increase by stealing them possession. Moreover, tourists can possibly bring with drugs which it is illegal. Therefore, it can be an aspect to affect on habitants of visited country. For example, there are nationalities have been caught on the airport that they had drugs hidden in their bags. But at the end, they have been discovered in the check points before entering the country by responsible persons, who work in the airport.
In brief, tourism can be as an advantage and disadvantages at the same time, as it helped many countries in growth economically. But we believe advantages can outweigh disadvananrages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83620689655 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84287492489 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520114942529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6236110796 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.125 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141844043994 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394868868328 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598477666682 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110859739821 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854452825225 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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