TPO 28- integrated writing - Peary's trip to the North Pole
In the reading, the author claims that there are three legitimate logics approve indeed Robert E. Peary – who was an illustrious explorer - did manage to get to the North Pole. However, finding all the ideas questionable and implausible, the lecturer thoroughly casts doubts on what is claimed in the text and present some evidence to the contrary.
At first, the author argues that a committee – including members of National geography Society - has substantiated that Robert E. Peary actually reached the North Pole by inspecting the Peary's records. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that although the committee approve this statement, they was not impartial. In fact, not only had funded the committee the expenditure of the Peary's journey but also they were Peary's close friends. Another noticeable matter is that all the process took merely 2 days and undoubtedly they could not have precisely perused such a brief, cursory probe.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that it was practicable for Peary to get to the North Pole in 37 days since Tom Avery succeeded to do the same trip with similar facilities. On the other hand, the lecturer disputes the points by clarifying the fact that regardless of the same equipment, the circumstances entirely differentiated between the Peary's trip and Avery's Journey. As a matter of fact, Avery did not have as much heavy a load as Peary since the Avery's food was dropped off by the airplane. Besides, so agreeable was the weather temperature in the Avery's trip that apparently, Peary's could not have reached the North Pole in such a short time.
Finally, the author asserts the Peary's photographs from the North Pole validated his spot by calculating the shadows and thereby the position of the sun in that region. The lecturer though, dismisses it by pointing out that not only the Peary's rudimentary camera did not take the pictures with decent quality but also the shadows become faded by passing the time. Moreover, the fuzzy weather deteriorated the photos and had adverse effect on them. Therefore, these pictures cannot be considered as a reliable source to find the sun's position and affirm that they were taken in the North Pole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, besides, but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1373.03311258 135% => OK
No of words: 369.0 270.72406181 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0135501355 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64840949282 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 145.348785872 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542005420054 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 576.0 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6759825808 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0625 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06452816374 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478217264234 0.272083759551 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151960800042 0.0996497079465 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110141760331 0.0662205650399 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273666927231 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478151589149 0.0443174109184 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 63.6247240618 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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