There is a saying "Do as the Romans do". Do you think people should adapt and accept the culture of the country they visit? Is is possible to learn about a culture without learning the language?
In recent decades, there has been more and more people going abroad as for traveling or studying, leading to the increased demand of learning new cultures. Given that there are many other ways to know about a culture apart form language, visitors should adapt and respect another country’s culture.
The proper adaptation and acceptance of a new culture are conducive to everyone’s life abroad. First, by behaving like the locals, a foreigner can have the exposure to the original style of the natives, either thoroughly or partly. This, thereby, offers him or her a wealth of memorable experiences and a reservoir of knowledge. Second, the insight to a culture enables people to avoid unnecessary conflicts that could happen if people lack common understanding of the area. For example, due to cultural differences, right gestures at this place can be considered offensive to the other.
Although language plays an important role in the formation of a culture, it is still possible for people to learn about the lifestyles and thinking of the locals. In fact, despite the language barrier, most etiquettes can be learned by following the gestures fo the natives. For instance, when visiting Asia, the Westerners can know more about the cuisine tradition of the region by observing the way of using chopsticks. In addition, nowadays, the study of new cultures is assisted by advanced technology, such as the Internet and mobile phones. In order to learn the others’ civilization, people can make good use of translation or read documents about that culture in advance.
In conclusion, humans should be encouraged to adapt and accept the culture of the country they travel to because of its various benefits. Owing to body language and modern technology, everyone has chance to understand other countries’ etiquettes without knowing the language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: APART_FORM[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: apart from
...many other ways to know about a culture apart form language, visitors should adapt and res...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uments about that culture in advance. In conclusion, humans should be encouraged...
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Line 4, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tiquettes without knowing the language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, still, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27852348993 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95498904771 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610738255034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.7753970006 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318442214076 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102058467859 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707808342186 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192587740343 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384761832505 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.