Some people think that we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although some people subscribe to a belief that we might keep all our income without paying tax to the nation, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. Personally, I am convinced that we do need to pay tax to the nation.

Some reasons have been made by some people to defense that they should own all their earning rather than paying tax to the nation. Without paying taxes they believe that they can lead a better life than before. Another reason is that they believe taxes should be paid by companies or wealthy people rather than normal middle class. In additional, they don`t trust that the government spend their income taxes in a proper way which they might get benefits.

On the other hand, it is undeniable that taxes paid by individual citizens are an important source of governments. Hence, governments can not only use the taxes to redistribute the wealth but also to narrow the income gaps among the poor and the rich. Furthermore, governments also fund on the infrastructure medical facilities and education systems that would make our lives more convenient and sustainable. Last but not at least, the governments needs financial resources to boot economy and protect our environments.
Given above arguments,I believe paying taxes is obligation of every citizen. Those who has higher income should pay more taxes to the nation. Any practice of no paying taxes to the nation is unwise.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...n additional, they don't trust that the government spend their income taxes...
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...ey don't trust that the government spend their income taxes in a proper way...
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...oper way which they might get benefits. On the other hand, it is undeniable that...
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...n not only use the taxes to redistribute the wealth but also to narrow the income...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, at least, in addition, in fact, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93801652893 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66286647523 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0394261426 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9230769231 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26339505131 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993606587043 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906431653682 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165112396022 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105605058068 0.056905535591 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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