Some people feel that animals should have the same rights as humans, but others think they are not as equal or intelligent as us so should not have the same rights. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
In Christianisty, people believe that one of the assignments to mankind from god is to govern all living creatures. However, with several millenniums passing by, god would frown upon the widening disparity between animals and humans in which animals indisputably are exploited by human in many aspects such as food and drug testing. This status quo between animals and human has been sparked a hot debate over a decade. In this essay, the argument of both opponent will be presented along with some of my opinion.
To begin with the people who advocate to the animal's right, the compelling argument is that animals are living creature and have made no differences as human, so much so that animals also posses emotional feeling such as happiness and sadness like what humans have. To illustrate, crying is undoubtedly one of the human intrinsic behavior. It is not rare to hear from the news that the cattle was crying before they got slaughtered, thus proving that the cattle cry because of fearing to death, behaving exactly the same as human. Owning to the similarity to the human, the basic interests like avoiding unnecessary suffering of human should also considerately extend to all animals.
Not all the people, on the other hand, are sympathy on the suffering of the animals encountered and they hold the belief that this is just an example of the rule of the jungle in which the stronger animals can take the weaker one. While human has considerable higher intelligence than all other animals, they can circumvent the animals effortlessly. In this way, the relationship between animals and human is just as simple as the relationship between predator and prey. Humans are just following the basic rule of the earth.
In my perspective, contrary to the higher intelligent human can take the comparatively inferior animals, we should, instead, make use of our intelligent to create a better rule for all living things so that all animals can have equals to enjoy their life. Even though utopia is just an imaginative depiction, with our full effort, I believe this picture will eventually become reality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, while, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01699716714 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71383962071 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541076487252 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9161827229 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191820234452 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588155557965 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561977125661 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11153797249 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029549638917 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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