If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Achieving a goal by any means is unjustifiable. If a person achieves his target it may be worthy but the question arises whether it is by lawful means or not?
There is every possibility that a person will strive by all means to accomplish the task given to him. In today’s world everyone wants to set their position to achieve their respective goals in every field. For instance every student would love to secure good marks in exams. Most of them secure high scores. What matters is whether they have achieved it by their perseverance or by copying from fellow students.
The means of achieving ones goal is equally important. Unfair ways of attaining goal is often equivalent to putting oneself into trouble most of the time. There are many writers, scientists, artists who have been blamed for plagiarism. Even if they might have got their respective target completed, it would not be given due consideration by the community or the world as whole.
Attaining ones goal should not be just for bringing satisfaction to oneself at the cost of others happiness. There are many advances in nuclear studies with novel techniques of making weapons for attacking nations. Even if it a new achievement it will not be accepted by many who oppose war.
There are people who make money by illegal means, fooling others. Such people will not be accepted as millionaires since the means of achieving wealth was unlawful Such examples showcases that to make ones goal pertinent for appreciation, the means used to achieve the same must be justifiable too.
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Sentence: The means of achieving ones goal is equally important.
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Suggestion: Refer to ones and goal
Sentence: Even if it a new achievement it will not be accepted by many who oppose war.
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Suggestion: Refer to it and a
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