1. As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Once upon a time, there was nothing to do with thoughts except remember them. There was no alphabet to transcribe them in, no paper to set them down upon. Anything that had to be preserved had to be preserved in memory. To do so, first of all, we should be interested in subjects that I need to memorize, and think hard to understand. Today we think little because there are so many technologies that supplant our own brain. Therefore, I believe the ability of humans to think has deteriorated, so will do in the future.
It is indisputable that technology makes our life easier. When I wake up, th...
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Sentence: Once upon a time, there was nothing to do with thoughts except remember them.
Description: A preposition is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to except and remember
Sentence: When I wake up, the first thing I do is check my day planner app on my smartphone, which remembers my schedule so that I do not have to, and check my email instead mailbox outside.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and check
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