computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in office everyday. Work from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employees.
Do you agree or disagree ?
The invention of computer technology has created a revolution in early twenties. Created a fair large amount of job opportunities with lot of benefits for employees like work from home instead of working in office. Some feel that work from home should be encouraged as it is considered to be good for both the parties. Let us discuss both the views and conclude with my stand on the topic.
Firstly, employee can save the travel time and spend more time with family and have delicious home prepared food, which is very good for health, while working from home. He can concentrate and dedicate most ...
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- In many countries today the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 79
- In the world today how can companies keep their employees happy Express your idea and bring reasons for example how salary health care and holiday can make employees happy 59
- Today more and more young children have electronic gadgets such as computers and mobile phones Some people say that this is a positive development 77
- Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as part of the school curriculum Do you agree or disagree Discuss both these views and give your own opinion Give reaso 67
Comments
can i replace with "these
can i replace with "these gives the employees a good work life balance " ?
This gives the employee and
This gives the employee and good work life balance. or
This gave the employee and good work life balance.
Hi Team, Good day!! Could you
Hi Team,
Good day!!
Could you please help us to understand, when and how to use passive voice in essay.
Thanks.
1. Using the passive form is
1. Using the passive form is appropriate in two situations:
When we do not know who performed the action.
When the doer of the action is unimportant.
2. There are some good links to learn when to use passive voice:
http://www.writing.utoronto.ca/advice/style-and-editing/passive-voice
https://www.e-education.psu.edu/styleforstudents/c1_p13.html
3. Our suggestion is: Better to use active, not passive sentences in exams. Make sure you use passive sentences properly if you like to use them.
Sentence: This give the employee and good work life balance.
Description: The fragment This give the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace give with verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 287 350
No. of Characters: 1397 1500
No. of Different Words: 169 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.116 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.868 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.688 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 86 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.133 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.858 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5