Topic: All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Today’s world is a competitive world. Everyone wants to be at the top. Everyone wants to be successful today. This success is achieved by hard work, perseverance, smartness and gauging the performance. All these things are applicable equally to an individual as well as to an organization in which that individual is working. A successful company always tries to achieve this goal by considering the above factors.
When it comes to a big organization we need to think on wider terms. Company has to focus on its basic aim. Consider an example of an IT company. The basic aim of such com...
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Sentence: But in the end all companies wants its employee to be satisfied and happy as the performance of an employee is directly proportionate to the satisfaction of its employee.
Description: The fragment companies wants its is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace wants with verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
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Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 31 15
No. of Words: 500 350
No. of Characters: 2416 1500
No. of Different Words: 227 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.729 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.832 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.959 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 167 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 135 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 95 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 69 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.129 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.631 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.419 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.249 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.421 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5