The pie charts show the proportion of the world’s population living in urban and rural areas in 1990 and the forecast until 2025
The pie charts show the proportion of the world’s population living in urban and rural areas in 1990 and the forecast until 2025. These pies show the comparison between 1990 world population and 2015 world population.
Overall, it can be seen that in 1990-era people prefer to living in a rural and the forecast for 2025 people possibly choose live in the urban than in the rural.
In 1990 percentage Urban (developing world) increased from 25% to 46%. On the other hand, the percentage of population in urban (developed world) decreased from 17% to 13%. In comparison with the percentage population in urban 1990-2025, rural percentage in 1990-2025 decreased whether in developed world or developing world, from 52% to 37% for rural(developing world)`s population and 6% to 4% in rural (developed world)`s population.
As a result world in 2015 exactly in urban would be crowded this could happen because the pie represent a huge number of people who move from rural to urban, in 1990 58% people lived in a rural, nowadays until 2025 only 41% people live in urban.
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Sentence: As a result world in 2015 exactly in urban would be crowded this could happen because the pie represent a huge number of people who move from rural to urban, in 1990 58 people lived in a rural, nowadays until 2025 only 41 people live in urban.
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Sentence: In comparison with the percentage population in urban 1990-2025, rural percentage in 1990-2025 decreased whether in developed world or developing world, from 52 to 37 for ruraldeveloping worlds population and 6 to 4 in rural developed worlds population.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 180 200
No. of Characters: 850 1000
No. of Different Words: 85 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.663 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.722 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.69 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 38 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 31 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.498 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.286 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.55 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.816 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.195 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4