People natural resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause?What solutions can you suggest?
Because of many reasons, people held a negative perception of having an unstable life. Although this fear of changing can lead to some unforeseen consequences, society and individuals can take steps to solve these potential problems.
One obvious issue is the fact that without any up and down in life, a man can not gain the true perception about himself. It is argued by many celebrities through experiences that facing and puzzling out a problem is the only way for people to explore their limitation and end up with a successful life. Therefore, those people who are going through a common steady life usually cannot understand themselves which can lead to the lack of happiness in life. Besides, one more dangerous problem of this secure life trend is a psychology phenomenon happen when any sudden change which cannot be avoided such as divorce or loosing someone falls into one’s life. In normal cases, people can get depression for such a long time before getting over them, but the worst is that they will be trapped in that situation and cannot gain back their life.
However, there are several actions can be taken into account to solve these problems. One easy solution is that in spite of being passive in life, people should push themselves to difficult situations such as new adventures, new job titles, setting new personal missions, etc. This will help them to learn not only about new things but also find out their potential abilities. But the most important way is that the recognition about the advantages of taking risk should be spread in people’s mind: school education, frequent seminars, workshops, meetings, etc. By doing this, people can find their own way to make their life more colorful.
In conclusion, various measures can be taken to solve the problems of changing life resistance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02295081967 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6107214908 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586885245902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3026639498 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214461738973 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891820549591 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616196807735 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149426148593 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00953980550156 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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