Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Celebrity's life style can not be as a normal person. Although many extra facilities are provided for them, their life is limited in some aspects, which may not be accepted by wide range of people. In order to survey advantages and drawbacks of being a celebrity, this essay is organised.
Huge number of people adore to be in center of others attention. Famous persons are welcomed everywhere they are going to go. Individuals almost attempt to take picture or a signature of them. But these demeanor are enjoyable for short time. In fact they are temporary pleasure.
Having specific life style can be frustrating for long time. Based on several researches lots of celebrities are suffering from mental disorders like depression, owing to their personal life is disrupted by journalist or other folk. They can not determine particular boundary, while they need usual life as well as other people. Moreover, Based on their position in a society. individuals always expect them to have acceptable manner. For instance, regarding to symbolic role of an actor, they should always be careful about his/her conduct and avoid of chaos to not having negative effect on their followers.
All in all being a celebrity means to accept numerous changes in life. I strongly believe that a normal individual is not able to bear these alterations, which is need specific character.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this demeanor' or 'these demeanors'?
Suggestion: this demeanor; these demeanors
...ake picture or a signature of them. But these demeanor are enjoyable for short time. In fact t...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Individuals
..., Based on their position in a society. individuals always expect them to have acceptable m...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons, which is need specific character.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07522123894 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71723570567 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637168141593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6639759487 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.6875 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137488571194 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047029983353 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535494121733 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903604212276 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030236196401 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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