Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 'It is impossible to be completely honest with friends.
The question is whether It is impossible to be completely honest with friends or not. This question requires a deep understand from relationship what we seek and want in an association, so with this in mind everyone can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however I am inclined to express that there is not any impossible thing in the world and in my view, one of the most noticeable factor in each tie is honesty. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them in following essay for empowering my argument:
To begin with, it goes without saying that nowadays people live in the world that the trust has been lost its state; therefore people have become skeptical in compared with the past. Being introvert has caused human begins to relay on each other barely, even more this circumstance has affected on their communications. It is often said by psychologists that todays' strict rules play a crucial role in choosing friends; hence, a small lie in a relationship which has been built based on
moral values can create destructive consequence. To elucidate, take my own experience. After experiencing some failed friendships, finally I could make an appropriate friend for myself. All things were awesome until my ex-boyfriend called me and asked me to visit him for receiving my old stuffs. I thought that it was not necessary to notice to my new friend and then I went to that appointment. Coincidentally my new- friend came to drink a coffee with his boss. Needless to say the rest of story but in short my new friendship ruined and that former trust never returned while I felt it could be a mundane issue lack of worth for saying.
The second reason for my vantage point lies the fact that if someone lies for one time, he will be used to doing this. There is a proverb in my culture that if a person steals an egg in childhood, he will rob the ostrich in the future because soul of humanistic requires it. Lie can influence on creating other negative features. If a man cannot say the reality simply, he will foster disloyalty, betrayal and so on in himself. In addition, some people believe that there is a type of lie which is called white lie. This type of lie is not capable to harm on others; however, one should not forget that the white lie term has been created by people who want to justify their wrong behavior. No matter how safe it is, it is able to sear reliance roots.
As I have illustrated, I strongly disagree with lack of honest in any relationship. If we accept to commence a friendship, so we have to be engaged to its rules otherwise about horrible consequence, we will be responsible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, however, if, incidentally, second, so, then, therefore, while, i feel, in addition, in short, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64331210191 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73768964228 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569002123142 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 680.4 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6525276817 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.35 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.55 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178755099303 0.236089414692 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530026271939 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081356707066 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106259137108 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633391252308 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.002688172 190% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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