Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books any more .（090329CN=070804CN）
Nowadays, digital books have become the spotlight among the people ,as the development of technology. Due to convenience, free of price and portable , more and more people prefer digital books to traditional paper books . However, as far as I am concerned , digital books can not be the substitute for the original paper book thanks to some unique property which paper books possess such as safety , comfortability and utility .
First and foremost, traditional paper books are safe for preserving the significant contents and materials. Currently , the safety and privacy have...
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Sentence: What make them convenient is reading news or novels on the internet .
Description: The fragment What make them is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
Sentence: As the statistics which from the New York Time shows that , Currently elders who has an interest in reading on internet have easily got illness than ever before.
Description: The fragment , Currently elders who has is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace has with have
flaws:
No. of Words: 618 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 29 15
No. of Words: 618 350
No. of Characters: 2948 1500
No. of Different Words: 270 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.986 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.77 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.502 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 191 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 141 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.31 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.378 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.655 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.308 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.464 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.109 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5