The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
This line graph illustrates the percentage of people aged 65 years and above from 1940 till date and predicted values till 2040 in Japan, Sweden and USA. Overall it is estimated that in 2040 Japan will have the highest number of people above 65 and USA will have the lowest.
Looking at Japan, in 1940 only 5 percent population was above 65 year age line which is the lowest number as compared to rest of countries. There was a slow decline in the numbers till 2000 after which the percentage kept on increasing. It is predicted that there will be a sharp rise in old aged people in Japan in 2040 where almost 27 % of the population will be above 65.
On the other hand, USA started off at 9 % in 1940 which was the highest percentage for that time. The figures kept on increasing until 1980 where it hit a plateau at 15%. It is predicted that there will be a rise in the population above 65 in 2020 to 23 % in 2040.
Sweden on the other sided shows a mixed pattern, the figures kept on fluctuating with an overall increase and is thought to go up to 25 % on 2040/.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27227722772 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32724846099 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.9379717311 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8888888889 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163886906435 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753172737333 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425519141499 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103711664432 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368264283828 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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