Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people with a better education. Agree or disagree?
having some ideas that the better way is educational promotion than imprisonment to reduce the crime rate. I disagree totally that.
Prison, where offenders are incarserated, is so important to control crinimals in society. Indeed, no country doesn’t have offences. So, with the serious and dangerous criminals have to icarcerate behind bars in order to warn, re-educate, punish appropriately and prevent residents against unsafety. For example, in singapore, this is the safest country thoughout the world. But there is still 16 peoples that were killed, robber,...; they need to prisons to keep the security for nation.
Also , for other solution is reinforcement of education, this is the wonderful way to decrease the number of criminals. When a person is educated about law, the correct things since being a child, that guy will be a good man and the low ability of offences. But inevitable the person, who have incorrect think and behavior or immigrant from other area.
In conclusion, i think the countries should have prisons to punish offenders and complement the better education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32183908046 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92226359006 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.384769539078 780% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0604130472 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1818181818 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176162638296 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624616998854 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480702321424 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111833815017 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415910351647 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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