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Should retirement be compulsory at 65 years of age?
Advanced technological development had lead to wide-spread growth of business around the world. This never-racking situation thrives for more and more employers. However experienced workers are the most outstanding workers for the success of a particular business. Having said that, does the retirement age of 65 acceptable?
Different countries follow different policies when it comes to employment. For example, age of 60 is the retirements age in many Asian countries where as 65 is the retirement age in European countries. Although there are several arguments against retirement for the last c...
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Sentence: This may not be accepted by some folks but health conditions stands as a barrier with ageing.
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therefore by have a retirement age of 65, the company loses their trainers.
therefore by having a retirement age of 65, the company loses its trainers.
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Average Word Length: 5.052 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.013 2.4
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Sentence Length SD: 8.763 7.5
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