you moved to a new place to attend a training course in college. write a letter to your friend about it and say
When and where did you move.
Describe the course you are taking.
Why can it be beneficial to your friend.
Dear friend,
How are you? Hope you and your family doing well. Firstly, sorry, i have not writer for a few months. I have been so busy last few months and never seems to have a minute to myself. Here, I extremely happy to inform you that, I passes Basic Life Support programme along with my Bachelor in Science degree programme.
I was really glad that I received a chance to apply this course, which is only allowed for 15 persons from final year of course. This course is lasted for 3 months, including theories as well as practical,started in the month of March in New Delhi, the capital city of India. As you working as a Basic Support Practitioner ,you know very well about this programme and thanks for your big support as well as your encouragement to attend this programe with a special interest. Now I realized about the importance of BLS programme in a daily life. Now I am much more confident to treat a unattended person who ha cardiac arrest in public places. Moreover ,I can appaly in your firm as a BLS practitioner so that we can continue our friendship forever.
Hope this letter find you more happy and waiting for your replay.
yours lovingly,
sherin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear friend, How are you? Hope you and your family do...
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Line 2, column 234, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'pass'
Suggestion: pass
...I extremely happy to inform you that, I passes Basic Life Support programme along with...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Bachelor in Science degree programme. I was really glad that I received a chan...
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Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , started
... including theories as well as practical,started in the month of March in New Delhi, the...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... working as a Basic Support Practitioner ,you know very well about this programme ...
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Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... Now I am much more confident to treat a unattended person who ha cardiac arrest...
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Line 3, column 658, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ardiac arrest in public places. Moreover ,I can appaly in your firm as a BLS pract...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e can continue our friendship forever. Hope this letter find you more happy and...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore happy and waiting for your replay. yours lovingly, ...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
... yours lovingly, ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... yours lovingly, sherin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, really, so, well, of course, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57819905213 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58004533837 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644549763033 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0319040652 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3076923077 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228867586606 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863440716036 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816218967251 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115685666424 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596882999752 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.